Dr. Deb Thornton
email: thorntde@uvsc.edu
office: LA 126c
office hours: 11:30-1:00 T TH, and by appointment
phone: 863-8573

English 1010

Introduction to Writing

or

The Mental Gymnasium

 

TEXTS DESCRIPTION OBJECTIVES ATTENDANCE PAPERS CONFERENCES GRADES ASSIGNMENTS

Prerequisites

COMPASS Writing/DRP scores of 80+/77+, or ACT English/ACT Reading scores of 19+/19, or completion of ENGH 0990 and RDG 1170 each with a grade of "C-" or higher, or challenge by essay assessment for a $20 fee.

Texts

Pilgrim at Tinker Creek by Annie Dillard
Allyn & Bacon reader
Ready Access to the World Wide Web
http://www.uvscnet.uvsc.edu/home/thorntde/uvsc/ (click the 1010 link)

Course description (quoth the catalogue)

"Emphasizes, in writing intensive workshops, rhetorical knowledge and skills. Teaches critical reading, writing and thinking skills. Explores writing situations as complex and recursive processes. Enhances basic literacies, addressing both rhetorical problems and conventions of language use (within the context of Standard Written English). Three major essays with graded revisions(s), microtheme, in-class writing and collaboration, portfolios, and journals."

Instructor’s description

When you sign up for my 1010 sections, you must forget that you are a student. From the first minute of the semester, you must consider yourself a writer. No exceptions. You are a writer in the mental gymnasium, and you are going to study language from many perspectives, and you will be reading, writing, and thinking a lot (these are the pushups and crunches of the gymnasium). Some have told me that the writing load is heavy, but if you take the challenge the course offers, you will hone your skills throughout the semester and emerge with strengths you never knew you had. The first step is shedding your student-identity and adopting the writer-identity. The readings cover pertinent global issues. If you read carefully, Annie Dillard’s Pilgrim at Tinker Creek invites you to see the world in a way you probably have not considered it before. All of the readings challenge you to discover your own thoughts and to expand your thoughts. The course is about learning to write your world as it expands.
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Course objectives

English 1010 is a General Education course that may seem like one requirement on a long list of courses that you have to take to get a degree. One more hoop to jump through before you can get your coveted piece of paper. A so-what course that you endure for four months and never think about again.

It may surprise you, therefore, to learn that there is a State Task Force on General Education that has named five goals for General Education courses throughout the state. Having addressed the question "What is an educated person?" from a variety of perspectives, they have developed five qualities that every General Education course should address. It is my pleasure to observe that all five of these requirements fit perfectly within the task force's parameters. Here's how I hope that you will have developed a number of skills that will assist you in your lifelong process of becoming an educated person.

Before the tone gets too lofty, let's look at the objectives themselves and see how English 1010 satisfies them.

1. Students critically evaluate information they hear, read, and see.

English 1010 is a course in critical thinking. You need to know that reading, writing, and thinking are three parts of the process of expanding your mind's muscles, and that if you neglect any of the three the others weaken. By exploring the large ideas that have been recorded by some of the world's finest minds, by learning to grasp and think through a complex idea as you read, you will learn to evaluate arguments that others make. Class discussions afford the opportunity to hear information, to kick ideas around with your learning community. You will learn to judge the viability of research sources. In short, in-depth evaluation is one of the core skills this class fosters.

2. Students apply methods from particular areas--the humanities, fine arts, physical sciences, natural sciences, and/or social sciences--to collect and interpret data on specific issues.

By studying a range of texts from various areas and writing about ideas that you encounter and supporting them with new-found information, you will fulfill the cross-disciplinary intent of this item.

3. Students can work well collaboratively in diverse groups.

Guess what? You have to do group work. You may even write a paper with other group members and you all get the same grade. No whining. Just do it. There's strength in numbers. Cliches aside, you'll find that collaborative learning is as rewarding as it is sometimes frustrating. More than likely, group work will be a feature of your "later life" when you get a job. Group work makes you stronger--it's the "buddy system" of the mental gymnasium.

4. Students communicate clearly and in writing, orally, and quantitatively.

Well, this part is practically a no-brainer. This is a writing class, after all, and you will have to speak in class and with your peers, so the oral communication is as much a given as is the writing part. Quantitative communication will come into play when you use statistics and quotations to support your arguments in your papers.

5. Students apply to a given issue insights from some of the following: the life sciences, physical sciences, social humanities, and fine arts.

The task force's supplemental questions are worth typing here:
What problems lend themselves to study using reductive methods?
What issues benefit from a multidisciplinary study approach?
What are the advantages and weaknesses of an integrated approach?
The questions are all worth considering in some detail--and no doubt we will, in this course on thinking (and metaphor). We will ponder these questions. We will ponder the assumptions behind these questions. We will learn how to think about the broader and narrower straits of thought. Because this course is taught with nothing if not an "integrated approach," its strengths and weaknesses will make themselves known to you. The readings in the text address questions in each of the named categories (with the possible exception of fine arts, but we'll be seeing some serious fine language arts).

So, now that you have some sort of ideological frame for the course and how it fits into the broader world of General Education, I hope that you can see the relevance of all GE courses.

One final note: In order to address and satisfy all five of the task force's elements, I didn't have to change one single teeny tiny thing about this class. They are built in, part of the course's DNA. I just had to write these paragraphs. So be on the lookout for ways in which we fulfill these requirements in this class. If you have any other class that meets more of these requirements more directly than this class does, please tell me so that I can go get another advanced degree and teach that subject too.

So in conclusion I would just like you to remember all of the above statements. (A student once tried to end an essay that way. Do you think it's effective?) I feel compelled to add that I believe in the motivations that the task force acts upon just as strongly as I believe in the objectives they outline. I believe that human beings have the capacity and the obligation to learn and grow all their lives. I believe beyond that list of five academic attributes clear out to the limits of the human soul. Language is the means by which we gain access to the outer limits, the means by which we communicate our learning to ourselves and others. And I can tell you that I wouldn't be teaching this course if I didn't know that language is the key to perception, if I didn't know that language gives you the power to change your lives and the lives of others. It's nice that the task force came up with the list of five habits of highly educated people, but really they haven't said something you shouldn't already know if you have enrolled at Utah Valley State College.

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Attendance and participation

Your attendance and participation are vital to the success of your classroom community. Please let me know in advance if you have to miss class, and I will look kindly on no more than two absences during the semester--yes, that means your grade will suffer if you miss class. In the event of an unexcused absence, you will not be able to make up any in-class work that you missed. Similarly, quizzes given at the beginning of class cannot be made up if you are tardy. That is, if you enter the room after the quiz has begun.

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Two Main Types of Papers

A reading journal entry of 350 words responding to the assigned readings is due at the beginning of the pertinent class hour. You are also obligated to post your response to the class newsgroup at 10 p.m. the night before class. Each journal should show two things: 1) that you comprehend the author's primary arguments and 2) that you have an intelligent response of your own to the author's thoughts. Each journal is worth 20 points.

And then there are the more formal papers. You will write a variety of papers for the course; the topics will arise from classroom discussion. You will write argumentation paper, a persuasion paper, a text analysis, a narrative, six papers in all and a seventh reflective paper. Papers are due at the beginning of the course hour on the appropriate day. To avoid last-minute printer problems, write and print your paper well in advance of the deadline.

All papers are due at the beginning of class. Late papers will be penalized 20 percent per day.

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Paper conferences

I will meet with you on a regular basis to review your paper drafts and answer any questions about the class that you may have. Feel free to bring as many drafts of your work as you wish to; generally speaking, the more time you spend in paper conferences, the more your writing will improve, as every conference is geared to meeting your individual needs.

Final exam

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In accordance with UVSC policy, no early finals can be given. Don't ask for exceptions because that is unfair to your peers. Schedule your flights and vacations accordingly.

Grades

Every assignment counts toward your final number of points: journals are 20 points, and papers generally are worth 100 points. The rest of the assignments—quizzes and attendance points, etc.—will count for a proportional amount of your grade. The scale is given on the main page.

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Tentative Schedule

 

Date

Reading assignment due for that day

Assignment

28 Aug. TH

course introduction: the Mental Gymnasium; King

http://www.mecca.org/~crights/dream.html

 

02 Sept. T

King "Letter from a Birmingham Jail" http://www.almaz.com/nobel/peace/MLK-jail.html

Journal

04 Sept. TH

King Nobel prize acceptance speech: http://www.nobelprizes.com/nobel/peace/MLK-nobel.html

King last speech: I’ve been to the mountaintop (scroll down) http://www.spartacus.schoolnet.co.uk/USAmountaintop.htm

Journal

09 Sept. T

Reading and writing and thinking and rewriting

Paper 1 draft due

11 Sept. TH

Gandhi on nonviolence

http://www.mkgandhi.org/nonviolence/Gandhi’sstruggle.htm

Journal

16 Sept. T

Gandhi: click the links to Gandhi’s views on education, then read "Gandhi the Prisoner—A Comparison" by Nelson Mandela http://www.mkgandhi.org/articles

Paper 1 due

18 Sept. TH

Nelson Mandela www.anc.org.za/ancdocs/history/mandela/1960s/rivonia.html www.anc.org.za/ancdocs/history/mandela/1990/release.html

www.anc.org.za/ancdocs/history/mandela/1993/sp931210.html

Journal

23 Sept. T

Thoreau’s Essay on the Duty of Civil Disobedience http://www.cs.indiana.edu/statecraft/civ.dis.html

journal

25 Sept. TH

Thoreau, continued

Journal

30 Sept. T

Paper draft workshop; introduction to metaphor and interior unity in writing

Paper 2 draft

02 Oct. TH

Plato http://www.historyguide.org/intellect/allegory.html

Journal

07 Oct. T

study of metaphor http://www.csc.liv.ac.uk/~rcp/metaphor.html

Paper 2 due

09 Oct. TH

writing compelling arguments and avoiding logical fallacies http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/logic.html

Journal

14 Oct. T

write a paper using as many fallacies as possible

Paper 3 draft due

16 Oct. TH

Fall break

 

21 Oct. T

Punctuation workshop; sentence-level revision

Paper 3 due

23 Oct. TH

Grammar workshop; sentence-level revision

Handouts

28 Oct. T

Introduction to research: finding and documenting sources

Handouts

30 Oct. TH

Introduction to Dillard Pilgrim chapter 1

Journal

04 Nov. T

Pilgrim chapter 2

Journal

06 Nov. TH

Pilgrim chapters 3-4

Journal

11 Nov. T

Pilgrim chapters 5-6

Journal; draft 4

13 Nov. TH

Pilgrim chapters 7-8

Journal

18 Nov. T

Class presentations: The Language of Beauty

Paper 4 due

20 Nov. TH

Class presentations: The Language of Beauty

Paper 5 due

25 Nov. T

Pilgrim chapters 9-10

Journal

27 Nov. TH

Thanksgiving holiday

 

02 Dec. T

Pilgrim chapters 11-12

Journal; draft 6

04 Dec. TH

Pilgrim chapters 13-14

journal

09 Dec. T

Pilgrim chapter 15

journal

11 Dec. TH

conclusions

Paper 6 due

16 Dec. T

Final examination section 25: 9 a.m.; section 63: 1 p.m.